MY HOBBY IS THINGS THAT I LIKE

People said that " hobby is doing anything regularly, voluntarily;moreover, you concern and spend a lot of time to do it". Do you think so? If not, what is hobby, for you?.

If you ask me, i will answer that my hobby is doing what i like. Perhaps i love everything around me, but i only like collecting things that are really beautiful, especially souvenir which can be necklaces, earings, pencils, teddies, dolls, clasp of key, etc.

When i was a little girl, i liked them too really to take them in home wherever i saw.Although they were very dirty, i also took and cleaned them. Then put them into a big box. Collecting stuff really keeps me the most occupied.

Once my father bought me a lovely doll. I carried her in my arms. My neibour friend stole and divided her into many parts;therefore, i cried and run away to find her. As a result, she lost one arms. I loved her very much, but i didn't know how to do to find her last arms. A few day later, i bought smaller another. She had long yellow hair, even clothes, so i often brushed and sewed clothes for her. It is childish, isn't it?.

Although i am a student of university now, my character is same as a child. Up to now, i have regretted because i didn't take my lovely doll follow me. Fortunately, my uncle gave me a teddy. I always hug her every night, which helps me reduce to be afraid of darkness; besides, it makes me feel more optimist.

When i go to market or supermarket, i often stand where sells souvenir. They are displayed well, so i can go window- shopping, but not necessarily with the idea of buying anything. Everything is beautiful, but the price is too expensive for me take. I wish i had a small teddy to hang my bag. Whenever i see a teddy, i often stand and utter compliments. I want to touch with them; nonetheless, i don't dare because of my conditional family. At this time, i only take a photograph of them. Then i keep them inside a big box which i made and decorated. Sometime i search a lot of photographs on the internet; furthermore, my friends send me them, which make my collection richer and richer.

If i was born in rich family, i believed i would have private paradise with many teddies; i would hang souvenir on the wall. May be i could become "a girl collects many teddies and souvenir in the world when she was only 6". I would give them to people that i love and respect. I think depending on gift and receiver because each gift was different significance with each person.

To collect souvenir and photograph teddies, i spend a lot of money and time. Now i stop my hobby, for i must spend money for study. I believe i will be successful on a nearest day,and i can continue my hobby.

NOTE:

red: coordination.

green: subordination.

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MY UNIVERSITY

In high school, my friends and I joked modestly " I am stupid, so I certainly fail the finish school examination". However, I knew that they would try overcoming challenge and getting high mark in the examination. As a result, each person has individual choose and now my old friends are learning at colleges, universities.
Being a rustic girl in the rural, I fell strange when I live in Ho Chi Minh City, for pace of life is unlike with my countryside, even people.
I feel lucky because I passed the entrance examination. Up to now, I can't believe I am one of students in the university of Technical Education Ho Chi Minh City. It's a large school. There are many room, libraries,etc.as same as my high school. Facilities seems to be convenient for study such as the laboratory, micro, loudspeaker,etc. There are many trees, which makes me miss my countryside;moreover, our school connects network, sets up supermarket where there are full of goods, teaching and learning material. School is also has student's dormitory, which resolves one of the worries of students.
Unlike other high schools, there are many departments in university. Each of them is splitted into many small majors and a student only learns one major in school from 4 to 6 years.Teachers don't write words on the board. Their responsibility is to teach and explain;thus, we must pay atention to teacher's explanations. We aren't checked old lesson by our teachers.We only have two tests in mid and end semester.If someone fails, the only way is paying fee so as to learn again; therefore, we study themselves with a high- levelled determination.
I surprise that a student can join other classes in university, he isn't punished and paid fee. The most comfortable thing is that we don't need to wear uniform when we go to school. We have to be active to find information through books, teachers, friends or internet. It is hard but all try.
Now I am a freshman of the department of foreign languages in school. I have learned here for over 2 months.At the first time, when I went to school, I feel everyone is better at english than me, which makes me lost my confidence. My classmates are open and friendly, so I make friend all them. My class is divided some small groups to work together, and we seem to perfect lesson well. All of members in our class have solidarity. I'm glad to see that.
I know it is difficult to learn english at university; nonetheless, I have enough my confidence in order to pursue my dream because of my teachers' enthusiasm. Don't waste time. Let's try to get our dream. I believe you will be succesful. Good luck.

MY FRIENDSHIP

Friendship is sacred feeling between people.It doesn't discriminate between the old and the young,the rich and the poor.
Do you know how to be set up friendship?When starts?Why?
At high school, I was learned about the topic of friendship. It mentioned five qualities of true friendship.They are unselfishness, constancy, loyalty, trust, sympathy, and up to now, I haven't had an answer exactly.
When I started to go to school, I had many friends.Almost my friend is girls, so it is easy to talk, confide and share with experience together.Once, I wish I had a brother who is not only honest but also caring; my wish had come true.In fact,I only think he is my close friend.Soon, our friendship seemed to stop because of my parents' debarment.They worried that we could reach the special friendship;hence,I wasn't allowed making friend with boys from that time.Meanwhile,I was open my classmates,both girls and boys.
If my friends and I have to supply five qualities which I have just mentioned,perhaps I have really had true friendship yet.Actually,I had many kind of friends.Linh is one of them.She is active and creative.We met each other at the first time in 2006.At that time, she left bad impression, for she didn't put on her sandal when she went to the board.We don't live at the same village, but the God arranged us to learn together at high school. During the first year, I haven't seen her again.On a nice day, we studied together at maths teacher's home. I greeted her, and she replied by smiling.
Linh has a long black hair, oval face, slim figure.She is conclusive; besides, she seems not to be embarrassed in front of any problem. Linh studied professional natural sciences,and she used to help me in study. Thank to her, I took back the basic knowledge, especially maths.I didn't want to betray my teachers and her instruction; therefore, I tried to improve, and I got the maximum score in the tests.
Linh is also studious but also keenly interested in Mathematics;moreover, she is very intelligent and quick-witted with the difficult homework, questions.She is a good student many continuous years; furthermore, she received the scholarship of the Society of Learning Promotion.When I had any problem, I used to confide and share with her, and she gave me some sincere advice. I really admire her intelligence and frankness.
Now,both us are freshmen of university, so it is not easy to meet each other continuously.I haven't seen her for a long time, but I still engrave her face, gesture, expression in my mind.She is a beautiful decent friend forever.I hope that our friendship is closer and closer, and yours is the same way.

NOTE

Red: coordination

I LOVE MY FAMILY

Conceptualizing family(5) is very simple. For me, the family includes many members who live together under the same roof(2). I usually think my class, school, and dormitory are my family; however, there's no place like at home.

Like the children in the world(2),I also have parents.They give me two cute children(1),they are my younger brother(1) and younger sister(1).We live in Binh Thuan Province(2) where is about 150 km to Ho Chi Minh City.

My parents are farmers;thus, they have to work(3) hard on the kitchen-garden(2) everyday. In spite of the hardness of the work, they've been working(3) non- stop many continuous years(1).Their duty is to bring up(6) us, perhaps this is a main reason(1) so that they try to do(3) everything. The grey hair(1), brown skin(1) are two features of my parents.Because of thinking, there are full of wrinkles on their forehead(2).I love my parents very much.

My mother is capable of housework.She full grasps and efficiently handles family affairs.Being a first daughter(4), I'm aware of my responsibility.Sometime I help her.My mother has never used (3) violence with me. When I make mistakes, she admonishes of me lightly.As it would seem(3) that she dedicates her life to give(6) us knowledge.Whenever having problem(4), I often confide to her.She has recommended(3) me everything carefully when I go away.My mother is a really wonderful woman.(1)

Talking about my father(4),he rather enthuses in every fields(2) ,especially the work of the local. He seems to be(3) the bread-winner of the family, so he undertakes the hard word(1). My bike was often stolen(3) at high school(2) and from that time he has become(3) a repairman of my home.Unlike men, he doesn't like(4) cooking, but he cooks very well.The most delicious food(1), has been done(3) by him,is meat.He is a little hot-tempered person(1) ;therefore, I'm afraid of his recommendation.

My younger brother (1) and younger sister (1) are really obstinate, even me too.Once my parents recommend me, I scowled and argued. I feel that I was impertinent."After being shown what was wrong with her behavior, she still argued".This is the sentence which my parents judged of me.My younger brother (1) is grade three, but he isn't naive, even he is more profound and solid than me.I want to buy (6) a supperman robot for him. I wish I had a brother and sister when I was a little girl(1), and they would protect(3) and take(3) me go out around the city(2); however, I know that that won't come (3) true forever.

My house has two rooms: the kitchen and living room.I want to have(3) an individual room(1),and I will turn(3) it into the paradise with many teddies. At the weekend(2), my family doesn't have any special activity(1).We only watch television in the evening(1).

With my studying achievement(1), my parents are proud of it ,especially I have learned (2) at university(2).I feel lucky,for I was born(3) in my family(1).I want to succeed(6) in Ho Chi Minh City(1) so that my parents have life more happy in the future.I believe that I do that.

NOTE

(1) noun phrase

(2) preposition phrase

(3) verb phrase

(4) participial phrase

(5) gerund phrase

(6) infinitive phrase

WHO DO YOU WANT TO BECOME IN THE FUTURE?

The dream is aspiration, expectancy about something in the future(5).Your dream comes true(4), of course, it depends on yourself because you want to do this, you must overcome a lot of challenge.(1)

When I was a child, I don't know dream's definition exactly(1). If someone asked me who you had wanted to become in the future,I could answer I wanted to become a teacher,(5) for I loved my teachers.Is it very childish, isn't it?.During 4 years, while I was a student at secondary school, I didn't concern about my job in the future(1). Being a tenth grade student,I also didn't define clearly(3) that I will be somebody and somebody will be me in the future?.I only was going to learn the major which concern about English I like and I did that.
8 months ago,I confided to my English teacher(1) "Teacher,I respect you(1), so I will be an English teacher the same you, I will teach English at our school with you(1)"; nonetheless, it is only a word(5), and I know this word emits my sentiment.Although I respect my teachers, this isn't the reason which I have to continue their job(5).A few people has the notion that you are a teacher, you will remitted fee(1),especially you have much time with your family.
Once I didn't like becoming an economist(5).I only enjoyed a risk job such as police(1); moreover, I also like be an air hostess(5).I can travel, wear the nice clothes, speak English to foreign people everyday.
A guide is job which I had ever chosen to learn(5).I was going to examine into the university of culture(3), but my height isn't conditional enough to join.I passed two schools is the Foreign economy college and the university of Technical Education Ho Chi Minh City.When I took the newsprint, I worried(3)because I knew my father completed me learn at university.I don't desire level; I only want to studying the major I like.(1)
I don't know that I like learning economy anymore (1), so I decide to study the major of trade English in college; however, I am a freshmen at the university of technical education Ho Chi Minh now.(5)
Nowadays, English is not only a subject but also a means of communication between people.It has becoming the national language around the world(5),so I believe that I can find work easily after graduating(1). Only having English isn't enough, you have to master knowledge in every fields(1),which is very important.
Actually, I want to become an interpreter in the future(5). The simple reason is that I like communicating with foreign people(3); besides, this job help me earn a lot of money to raise my younger brother and younger sister with learning(2).It is very difficult to learn English at university; hence,I think I have to make a effort more and more.(1)
When you choose a job, you need to consider of your ability, hobby, condition of your family's finance and demand in society.I think that there are the necessary things(5), because they can be decided to your life in the future.I believe that you will be successful.(4)

NOTE

Red : direct object

Blue : indirect object(IO)

1. The numbers describe the five basic sentence patterns:

• (1) S+ACTION VERB(AV)+DO
• (2) S+AV+IO+DO
• (3) S+AV(+ADVERBS and PREPOSITIONAL PHRASES)
• (4) S+LINKING VERB(LV)+PREDICATE ADJECTIVE
• (5) S+LV+PREDICATE NOUN

THE PERSON I ADMIRE

Anyone has sentiment which can be family, love, friendship, etc(1), so who do you admire?

I asked everyone in my room(1), almost they answer that their parents.Me, too, but I will tell you about my uncle(2),who I admire and respect.

My uncle is Xuan Huong(5), who is a tall, handsome and quite fat man, has a square face.He is not only intelligent but also talented.He is an intelligent police(5), is working in district 1 in Ho Chi Minh City.Especially he is good at communicating English. He has delegated to learn English in Hanoi for 4 years,worked as an interpreter of his office(1);besides, he is a good tutor(5).He taught me a lot of structure grammar(2), bought me some English documentary(2),especially the dictionary costs 300 thousands dong(3). Actually,they are the significant presents which makes me snug and happy.(5)
Over 2 months ago, I went to Ho Chi Minh City in order to join the college and university entrance examination, he was thoughtful from accommodation to eating.After exam, he took me to visit Dam Sen park(1), bought me a teddy(2).Although he is a quick-tempered person, he recommends carefully and lightly(3) when I make mistakes.
He is also pious(4).He provided everything in my grandmother's home such as television, gas cooker, telephone, etc(1).Although he is over 35 years old, he has married yet.(3)
Now, I'm learning in Ho Chi Minh City;however, I see him a little(1). I said to myself that I will try to study to betray my family, uncle, teachers (3),and I did that at high school(1),especially I passed the entrance examination and learn at university(1), which seem to be a big joy with him. I find that it is very difficult to learn English at university,which makes him nervous,but I promise I try to improve english(1), and I believe I will be successful(4)Finally, I wish my uncle happy, lucky and successful.

NOTE

Red:direct object

Blue: indirect object

The nunbers describe the five basic sentence patterns. I explained them in next paper.