Thứ Năm, 29 tháng 10, 2009

WHO DO YOU WANT TO BECOME IN THE FUTURE?

The dream is aspiration, expectancy about something in the future(5).Your dream comes true(4), of course, it depends on yourself because you want to do this, you must overcome a lot of challenge.(1)

When I was a child, I don't know dream's definition exactly(1). If someone asked me who you had wanted to become in the future,I could answer I wanted to become a teacher,(5) for I loved my teachers.Is it very childish, isn't it?.During 4 years, while I was a student at secondary school, I didn't concern about my job in the future(1). Being a tenth grade student,I also didn't define clearly(3) that I will be somebody and somebody will be me in the future?.I only was going to learn the major which concern about English I like and I did that.
8 months ago,I confided to my English teacher(1) "Teacher,I respect you(1), so I will be an English teacher the same you, I will teach English at our school with you(1)"; nonetheless, it is only a word(5), and I know this word emits my sentiment.Although I respect my teachers, this isn't the reason which I have to continue their job(5).A few people has the notion that you are a teacher, you will remitted fee(1),especially you have much time with your family.
Once I didn't like becoming an economist(5).I only enjoyed a risk job such as police(1); moreover, I also like be an air hostess(5).I can travel, wear the nice clothes, speak English to foreign people everyday.
A guide is job which I had ever chosen to learn(5).I was going to examine into the university of culture(3), but my height isn't conditional enough to join.I passed two schools is the Foreign economy college and the university of Technical Education Ho Chi Minh City.When I took the newsprint, I worried(3)because I knew my father completed me learn at university.I don't desire level; I only want to studying the major I like.(1)
I don't know that I like learning economy anymore (1), so I decide to study the major of trade English in college; however, I am a freshmen at the university of technical education Ho Chi Minh now.(5)
Nowadays, English is not only a subject but also a means of communication between people.It has becoming the national language around the world(5),so I believe that I can find work easily after graduating(1). Only having English isn't enough, you have to master knowledge in every fields(1),which is very important.
Actually, I want to become an interpreter in the future(5). The simple reason is that I like communicating with foreign people(3); besides, this job help me earn a lot of money to raise my younger brother and younger sister with learning(2).It is very difficult to learn English at university; hence,I think I have to make a effort more and more.(1)
When you choose a job, you need to consider of your ability, hobby, condition of your family's finance and demand in society.I think that there are the necessary things(5), because they can be decided to your life in the future.I believe that you will be successful.(4)

NOTE

Red : direct object

Blue : indirect object(IO)

  1. The numbers describe the five basic sentence patterns:
  • (1) S+ACTION VERB(AV)+DO
  • (2) S+AV+IO+DO
  • (3) S+AV(+ADVERBS and PREPOSITIONAL PHRASES)
  • (4) S+LINKING VERB(LV)+PREDICATE ADJECTIVE
  • (5) S+LV+PREDICATE NOUN

Chủ Nhật, 25 tháng 10, 2009

THE PERSON I ADMIRE

Anyone has sentiment which can be family, love, friendship, etc(1), so who do you admire?
I asked everyone in my room(1), almost they answer that their parents.Me, too, but I will tell you about my uncle(2),who I admire and respect.
My uncle is Xuan Huong(5), who is a tall, handsome and quite fat man, has a square face.He is not only intelligent but also talented.He is an intelligent police(5), is working in district 1 in Ho Chi Minh City.Especially he is good at communicating English. He has delegated to learn English in Hanoi for 4 years,worked as an interpreter of his office(1);besides, he is a good tutor(5).He taught me a lot of structure grammar(2), bought me some English documentary(2),especially the dictionary costs 300 thousands dong(3). Actually,they are the significant presents which makes me snug and happy.(5)
Over 2 months ago, I went to Ho Chi Minh City in order to join the college and university entrance examination, he was thoughtful from accommodation to eating.After exam, he took me to visit Dam Sen park(1), bought me a teddy(2).Although he is a quick-tempered person, he recommends carefully and lightly(3) when I make mistakes.
He is also pious(4).He provided everything in my grandmother's home such as television, gas cooker, telephone, etc(1).Although he is over 35 years old, he has married yet.(3)
Now, I'm learning in Ho Chi Minh City;however, I see him a little(1). I said to myself that I will try to study to betray my family, uncle, teachers (3),and I did that at high school(1),especially I passed the entrance examination and learn at university(1), which seem to be a big joy with him. I find that it is very difficult to learn English at university,which makes him nervous,but I promise I try to improve english(1), and I believe I will be successful(4)Finally, I wish my uncle happy, lucky and successful.
NOTE
Red:direct object
Blue: indirect object
The nunbers describe the five basic sentence patterns. I explained them in next paper.