MY FRIENDSHIP

Friendship is sacred feeling between people.It doesn't discriminate between the old and the young,the rich and the poor.
Do you know how to be set up friendship?When starts?Why?
At high school, I was learned about the topic of friendship. It mentioned five qualities of true friendship.They are unselfishness, constancy, loyalty, trust, sympathy, and up to now, I haven't had an answer exactly.
When I started to go to school, I had many friends.Almost my friend is girls, so it is easy to talk, confide and share with experience together.Once, I wish I had a brother who is not only honest but also caring; my wish had come true.In fact,I only think he is my close friend.Soon, our friendship seemed to stop because of my parents' debarment.They worried that we could reach the special friendship;hence,I wasn't allowed making friend with boys from that time.Meanwhile,I was open my classmates,both girls and boys.
If my friends and I have to supply five qualities which I have just mentioned,perhaps I have really had true friendship yet.Actually,I had many kind of friends.Linh is one of them.She is active and creative.We met each other at the first time in 2006.At that time, she left bad impression, for she didn't put on her sandal when she went to the board.We don't live at the same village, but the God arranged us to learn together at high school. During the first year, I haven't seen her again.On a nice day, we studied together at maths teacher's home. I greeted her, and she replied by smiling.
Linh has a long black hair, oval face, slim figure.She is conclusive; besides, she seems not to be embarrassed in front of any problem. Linh studied professional natural sciences,and she used to help me in study. Thank to her, I took back the basic knowledge, especially maths.I didn't want to betray my teachers and her instruction; therefore, I tried to improve, and I got the maximum score in the tests.
Linh is also studious but also keenly interested in Mathematics;moreover, she is very intelligent and quick-witted with the difficult homework, questions.She is a good student many continuous years; furthermore, she received the scholarship of the Society of Learning Promotion.When I had any problem, I used to confide and share with her, and she gave me some sincere advice. I really admire her intelligence and frankness.
Now,both us are freshmen of university, so it is not easy to meet each other continuously.I haven't seen her for a long time, but I still engrave her face, gesture, expression in my mind.She is a beautiful decent friend forever.I hope that our friendship is closer and closer, and yours is the same way.

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I LOVE MY FAMILY

Conceptualizing family(5) is very simple. For me, the family includes many members who live together under the same roof(2). I usually think my class, school, and dormitory are my family; however, there's no place like at home.

Like the children in the world(2),I also have parents.They give me two cute children(1),they are my younger brother(1) and younger sister(1).We live in Binh Thuan Province(2) where is about 150 km to Ho Chi Minh City.

My parents are farmers;thus, they have to work(3) hard on the kitchen-garden(2) everyday. In spite of the hardness of the work, they've been working(3) non- stop many continuous years(1).Their duty is to bring up(6) us, perhaps this is a main reason(1) so that they try to do(3) everything. The grey hair(1), brown skin(1) are two features of my parents.Because of thinking, there are full of wrinkles on their forehead(2).I love my parents very much.

My mother is capable of housework.She full grasps and efficiently handles family affairs.Being a first daughter(4), I'm aware of my responsibility.Sometime I help her.My mother has never used (3) violence with me. When I make mistakes, she admonishes of me lightly.As it would seem(3) that she dedicates her life to give(6) us knowledge.Whenever having problem(4), I often confide to her.She has recommended(3) me everything carefully when I go away.My mother is a really wonderful woman.(1)

Talking about my father(4),he rather enthuses in every fields(2) ,especially the work of the local. He seems to be(3) the bread-winner of the family, so he undertakes the hard word(1). My bike was often stolen(3) at high school(2) and from that time he has become(3) a repairman of my home.Unlike men, he doesn't like(4) cooking, but he cooks very well.The most delicious food(1), has been done(3) by him,is meat.He is a little hot-tempered person(1) ;therefore, I'm afraid of his recommendation.

My younger brother (1) and younger sister (1) are really obstinate, even me too.Once my parents recommend me, I scowled and argued. I feel that I was impertinent."After being shown what was wrong with her behavior, she still argued".This is the sentence which my parents judged of me.My younger brother (1) is grade three, but he isn't naive, even he is more profound and solid than me.I want to buy (6) a supperman robot for him. I wish I had a brother and sister when I was a little girl(1), and they would protect(3) and take(3) me go out around the city(2); however, I know that that won't come (3) true forever.

My house has two rooms: the kitchen and living room.I want to have(3) an individual room(1),and I will turn(3) it into the paradise with many teddies. At the weekend(2), my family doesn't have any special activity(1).We only watch television in the evening(1).

With my studying achievement(1), my parents are proud of it ,especially I have learned (2) at university(2).I feel lucky,for I was born(3) in my family(1).I want to succeed(6) in Ho Chi Minh City(1) so that my parents have life more happy in the future.I believe that I do that.

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